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Originally Posted by lozer81
not my art,but my version.
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tons of wrong stuff in this.
first, and most important, is the drawing.....those roses have been hit by a truck or what ?? there is only one shade of red, its fine if you leave skin breaks, not fine if you saturate everything because it makes the entire piece unreadable.
the shading is sloppy.....you only used black....there are no mid and light tones.
linework is shaky as hell too......do smaller pieces and level up once those are clean. i could go on for pages but you get the point.